Saturday, May 2, 2009

BeAT POeM

i love her! Hate her!
back n' forth, never steady.
here! there! nowhere!

should i go ahead? or just take it slow!
leave her behind? or just let her go?
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1 comment:

  1. Rae ChiliMay 2, 2009 at 6:40 PM

    This is nice. I like how you show the torn-ness of Holden's feelings.

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